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| iggy, articles, bc media, unbreakable, albanian, parody, movie times, affiliate programs, weed, centraleurope, california, requiem for a dream, rude, smartmedia, georgia strait, bryan gordon, church, list of people by name, relief, frank dileo, don dunphy, rock n roll, blogs, | I thought that YOU had written the line you quoted above and not I. How silly of me! Yes I agree, upon re reading this yet again, I discovered that the ending would be much better if ended in a more comical manner, even in the same vein as that one line. Great idea. Submitted by Ed_0150 grow gallery (user info) at 2004-07-21 00:41:46 (#) Ranking: 2 No Comment Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-05-06 14:26:41 (#) Ranking: 0 Thanks W! (That's your code name now.) How is your life? grow gallery I've got a talented tongue too, btw. Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2004-05-02 21:24:12 (#) Ranking: 2 I'm so glad you got onto BAW Michael, I only just found out. I really liked this story when I read it...you're a very talented guy. Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-04-28 02:01:29 (#) Ranking: 0 please reference another copy of it then, idiot Submitted by Malachewaii (user info) at 2004-04-27 15:03:37 (#) Ranking: -2 This story is so old.. |
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| Submitted by mjt7420 (user info) at 2004-07-28 14:32:27 (#) Ranking: 1 This church actually didn't make me church smile,but it was good. Simple, dark, cynical... lovely. Submitted by sublime (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:56:36 (#) Ranking: 2 plus two for the hardest working man on ubersite Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:52:01 (#) Ranking: 0 Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-27 08:48:00 (#) Ranking: 2 the only thing, after one reading, that i would think of changing church would be to modify the ending with some kind of silly humour along the lines of this line: Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly. which made me laugh out loud. Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-01-27 14:02:22 (#) Ranking: 0 interesting idea shandy. That's pretty much what I meant. I chose the subtler route. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Shandy, I've just now realized what you mrant, a mere 6 months later. |
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