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| pot, putdowns, french/appendices/french english dictionary, write, pop, uruguayanspanish, political, classkcclass kc books overland park blue valley school district kansas, colombian, b boy, | missing orgy the gore factor here. What about the police. I am expected to believe the kid waited till the dad was in the fuckin hospital like 20 years later or some shit. Its not funny, scary, or even really interesting but eh... it is something better than 40 monkeys. orgy 'I feel like rating your story a -2, but boy I dont wanna hurt your feelings. Boy I say boy alot' Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-02 12:19:25 (#) Ranking: -2 Hey uh sorry that you have such a problem with me thinking your orgy story was a steaming pile of rat shit, but in my opinion it was so, yeah, don't get so wound up about it. Take it easy, relax, maybe take a nice hot bath and read a book, and make it a good book, maybe something to inspire you to not write such shit. |
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| But shitty in a humorous way. And PLEASE people stop with the predictable ending thing. I fucking get it now! It's predictable... ok! It's also a short story that I wrote in 15 minutes- how much development are you french/appendices/french english dictionary looking for, how many twists can you expect? The whole "point" of this story was his reflection on childhood (especially his father's sickness to the point of muredering his mother) and how he handled it (revenge) and also, his attitude: feeling like french/appendices/french english dictionary everything was shit around him, etc. NOT the ending. french/appendices/french english dictionary That was something i had to throw together to make it even worth reading. Submitted by MrCoffee (user info) at 2004-03-02 21:14:31 (#) Ranking: 2 good, though a predictable ending Submitted by blayke at 2004-03-02 14:04:46 (#) Ranking: -1 def. |
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