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| wordpress blogs, kids jokes, movie, actors, 1984, it, baby clothes, phish, list of themes, blink182, 2004, mandarinslang, digital camera, flicks, piercings, transition, advice, savage love, growing cannabis, thestranger, female comics, associate, | I merely found it quite humorous that you created an uber account merely to bash it. I find jtkiefer that more shitty than my post, to be frank. But shitty in a humorous way. And PLEASE jtkiefer people stop with the predictable ending thing. I fucking get it now! It's predictable... ok! It's also a short story that I wrote in 15 minutes- how much development are you looking for, how many twists can you expect? The whole "point" of this story jtkiefer was his reflection on childhood (especially his father's sickness to the point of muredering his mother) and how he handled it (revenge) and also, his attitude: feeling like everything was shit around him, etc. NOT the ending. That was something i had to throw together to make it even worth reading. Submitted by MrCoffee (user info) at 2004-03-02 21:14:31 (#) Ranking: 2 good, though a predictable ending Submitted by blayke at 2004-03-02 14:04:46 (#) Ranking: -1 def. |
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| Find something more productive to do. Submitted by C-Rock (user info) at 2004-03-04 01:35:34 (#) Ranking: -2 Yeah but that ending didn't even make it worth the reading. Next time instead of spending 15 minutes why not try an hour or so, 1984 maybe you'd make something that's so-so, instead of shit no! Doo doo dah, man I'm tired. And why didn't the cops get 1984 his dad after brutally murdering his mom? Did 1984 no one notice? What the fuck?! If no one gave a shit she must not have been all that spectacular that her son waits until he's an adult to go and murder his eldery, ill father. Is this guy a pussy or what? Who is he really? And yeah I created the account to reply to your story, because it's the most heniously putrid "story" that I've ever read. Dick and Jane had more literary style. Well keep up the good work, if you could call it that. Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-03 04:49:35 (#) Ranking: 0 none of you are going to "hurt my feelings" and c-rock, dont worry I didnt get upset in the least by you calling this post "a steaming pile of shit." |
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