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| stranger, books, standby me, opera, ps2, know, gigglechick, music reviews, inside my head, tv, olympus, humour, visual art, poisonous, money, music, colombian, quotes, 20jazzfunkgreats, shirts from hell, fiction, warner home video, | Trying to cram eight thousand plot twists into so short a story is moronic. Plot twists don't make a good story, psychology makes a good story. If you must write shit, do your best not to subject the rest of audio us to it, okay? Quit feeling sorry for yourself and wallowing in your dark pit of eternal despair or whatever and join the rest of us. Submitted by audio Random audio Joe at 2004-04-02 21:08:41 (#) Ranking: 0 time 4 buttsex Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-15 00:16:11 (#) Ranking: 0 Bullshit Submitted by The Egg at 2004-03-11 17:14:52 (#) Ranking: 2 That was amazing. Looking at all the other reviews, only a smart person would understand. Shit knows how smart you were to write it. |
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| now go fuck yourself 'insanethemind' is a song lyric, and trust me i am not an angst ridden teen. your review is so poisonous chock full of internet popularized catchphrases anyway. sheep Submitted by neoncoathanger <megangiles.at.olp.net> at 2004-04-19 19:22:10 (#) Ranking: -2 Okay, I must say I agree with c-rock on this one. Insane, reading your story is like being trapped in a seventh-grade poetry club. You're trying so hard to be dark and disturbing that you poisonous wind up sounding like a twelve year old drama queen. Hell, even poisonous the name you chose for yourself reeks of pre-teen female. Can the shock factor, quit trying to depress everybody and passing it off as talent, and write something with a little more motivation. Think it out a little more, will you? |
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