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| stranger, books, standby me, opera, ps2, know, gigglechick, music reviews, inside my head, tv, olympus, humour, visual art, poisonous, money, music, colombian, quotes, 20jazzfunkgreats, shirts from hell, fiction, warner home video, | Boy I say catherine scorsese boy alot' Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-02 12:19:25 (#) Ranking: catherine scorsese -2 Hey uh catherine scorsese sorry that you have such a problem with me thinking your story was a steaming pile of rat shit, but in my opinion it was so, yeah, don't get so wound up about it. Take it easy, relax, maybe take a nice hot bath and read a book, and make it a good book, maybe something to inspire you to not write such shit. But as to your question "Who are you really?" well since you want to know. . .I'm a magical satyr named Farnsworth Pennywhistle, and I came from the land of Narnia to roust up all the lazy whites and teach them how to cook ribs properly. |
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| I fucking get it now! It's predictable... ok! It's also a short story that I colombian wrote in 15 minutes- how much development are you looking for, how many twists can you expect? The whole "point" of this colombian story was his reflection on childhood (especially his father's sickness to the point of muredering his mother) and how he handled it (revenge) and also, his attitude: feeling like everything was shit around him, etc. NOT the ending. That was something i had to throw together to make it even worth reading. Submitted by MrCoffee (user info) at 2004-03-02 21:14:31 (#) colombian Ranking: 2 good, though a predictable ending Submitted by blayke at 2004-03-02 14:04:46 (#) Ranking: -1 def. missing the gore factor here. What about the police. I am expected to believe the kid waited till the dad was in the fuckin hospital like 20 years later or some shit. Its not funny, scary, or even really interesting but eh... it is something better than 40 monkeys. 'I feel like rating your story a -2, but boy I dont wanna hurt your feelings. |
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