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| bulletin board, lori anne flax, video, films, island, about, t shirts from hell, bill gates, rent, advice, the tyee, cannabis cup, artists, | Hell, even the name you chose pot shirts for yourself reeks of pre-teen female. Can the shock factor, quit trying to depress everybody and passing it off as talent, and write something pot shirts with a little more motivation. Think it out a little more, will you? Trying to cram eight thousand plot twists into so short a story is moronic. Plot twists don't make a good story, psychology makes a good story. If you pot shirts must write shit, do your best not to subject the rest of us to it, okay? Quit feeling sorry for yourself and wallowing in your dark pit of eternal despair or whatever and join the rest of us. |
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| Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-04-28 02:01:29 (#) Ranking: 0 please reference another copy of it then, idiot Submitted by Malachewaii (user info) at 2004-04-27 15:03:37 (#) Ranking: -2 This island story is so old.. don't tell me you're pawning it off as your own. Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-04-24 15:46:46 (#) Ranking: 0 island i'm touched by your kindhearted criticism, neoncoathanger. now go fuck yourself 'insanethemind' is a song lyric, and trust me i am not an angst ridden teen. your review is so chock full of internet popularized catchphrases anyway. sheep Submitted by neoncoathanger <megangiles.at.olp.net> at island 2004-04-19 19:22:10 (#) Ranking: -2 Okay, I must say I agree with c-rock on this one. Insane, reading your story is like being trapped in a seventh-grade poetry club. You're trying so hard to be dark and disturbing that you wind up sounding like a twelve year old drama queen. |
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