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| bulletin board, lori anne flax, video, films, island, about, t shirts from hell, bill gates, rent, advice, the tyee, cannabis cup, artists, | it is something better than 40 monkeys. 'I feel like rating your story a -2, but boy I dont wanna hurt your feelings. Boy I say boy alot' Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-02 12:19:25 (#) Ranking: -2 Hey uh sorry that you crouching tiger have crouching tiger such a problem with me thinking your story was a steaming pile of rat shit, but in my opinion it was so, yeah, don't get so wound up about it. Take it easy, relax, maybe take a nice hot bath and read a book, and make it crouching tiger a good book, maybe something to inspire you to not write such shit. But as to your question "Who are you really?" well since you want to know. . .I'm a magical satyr named Farnsworth Pennywhistle, and I came from the land of Narnia to roust up all the lazy whites and teach them how to cook ribs properly. |
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| But shitty in a humorous way. And PLEASE people stop with the predictable ending thing. I fucking get it now! It's predictable... ok! It's also a short story that I wrote in 15 minutes- bill gates how much development are you looking for, how many twists can you expect? The whole "point" of this story was his reflection on childhood (especially his father's sickness to the point of muredering his mother) bill gates and how he handled it (revenge) and also, his attitude: feeling like everything was shit around him, etc. NOT the ending. That was something i had to throw together to bill gates make it even worth reading. Submitted by MrCoffee (user info) at 2004-03-02 21:14:31 (#) Ranking: 2 good, though a predictable ending Submitted by blayke at 2004-03-02 14:04:46 (#) Ranking: -1 def. missing the gore factor here. What about the police. I am expected to believe the kid waited till the dad was in the fuckin hospital like 20 years later or some shit. Its not funny, scary, or even really interesting but eh... |
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