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| metrotimes, bars, rent, humour, floyd anderson (ii), rock/pop, community, poems, how i met your mother television show, requiem for a dream, church, slovenia, actors, m, puff, jack straw., concerts, insult, savage love, bill hanrahan, sales, review, commentary, | which made me laugh out loud. Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-01-27 14:02:22 (#) Ranking: 0 interesting idea shandy. That's pretty much what I meant. I chose the subtler route. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Shandy, I've just now realized what you mrant, a mere 6 months later. I thought that YOU had written the line you quoted above and not I. How silly of me! Yes I agree, upon re ragingbull (special edition) reading this yet again, I discovered that the ending would be much better if ended in a more ragingbull (special edition) comical manner, even in the same vein ragingbull (special edition) as that one line. Great idea. Submitted by Ed_0150 (user info) at 2004-07-21 00:41:46 (#) Ranking: 2 No Comment Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-05-06 14:26:41 (#) Ranking: 0 Thanks W! (That's your code name now.) How is your life? |
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| "I think you know," he puff says. "Know what?" asks the bedridden man. "Why I am here." "No, I am asking why." Silence fills the room. puff Fifteen seconds or so go by before the man holding the knife responds. When he does, his voice sounds different, younger. "You broke my heart, father." "Now I have to take your's." puff User Reviews Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-09-23 19:35:11 (#) Ranking: 1 this post was quite a disappointment, insanethefuckingmind! Submitted by mjt7420 (user info) at 2004-07-28 14:32:27 (#) Ranking: 1 This actually didn't make me smile,but it was good. Simple, dark, cynical... lovely. Submitted by sublime (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:56:36 (#) Ranking: 2 plus two for the hardest working man on ubersite Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:52:01 (#) Ranking: 0 Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-27 08:48:00 (#) Ranking: 2 the only thing, after one reading, that i would think of changing would be to modify the ending with some kind of silly humour along the lines of this line: Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly. |
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