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That's pretty much what I meant. I chose the subtler route. As always, insulting I appriceate your thoughts. I'm working on some things myself, with much more time, as I quit my job today! So, it seems I'll be on a vacation for a month or more, which I am thrilled about of course. Let's try insulting to chat on messenger sometime. Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-27 08:48:00 (#) Ranking: 2 fucking hell! there is some brilliant stuff in here, and it is quite a trip. definitely worth re-reading. the only thing, after one reading, that i would think of changing would be to modify the ending with some kind of silly humour along the lines of this line: Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly. which made me laugh out loud. hang on a sec, i will see if i can have a crack at it, rating to continue after a smoke break, computer crashing, wife telling me to go to sleep, child sqwarking etc etc Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2004-01-26 19:18:24 (#) Ranking: 2 Interesting story.
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